Hi Sydney! I like your idea a lot because I too think we need more booths at Library West. As far as your elevator pitch, you spoke very clearly and your message was very clear. You dressed professionally and really fit the business model you were presenting.
I also had a few suggestions on something you can do in your next elevator pitch: 1) I recommend using better phone positioning to avoid bright lights shining into the camera. 2) Try to use you hands effectively but not too much when you speak. This will allow the audience to focus more on what you are saying vs. what you are doing. 3) Finally, think of an interesting hook to use at the beginning.
These will bring your elevator pitch presentation to the next level!
Hi Sydney, it was encouraging to hear you connect the tips that Pryor included in his lecture to make the pitch more engaging. Using testimonials from people you interviewed makes the idea sound more credible and worthwhile, since more people have backed it. I agree with Cason, an engaging hook that relates to the need of the audience and their struggle in finding somewhere to sit will increase the attention of listeners. Then head into the solution component you are proposing. I think it was also important and effective that you included the positive results that will come from this change. This is always helpful for investors to see what can actually come about if they support you and the opportunity. Thanks.
Hey Sydney, I love the issue you are targeting as I struggle with finding a booth almost everyday. It is very important that you added how you are going to implement this plan and take it into action. I think another aspect of your problem could target finding booths by outlets as most students use tablets/computers to help them study/ see their notes and often their devices begin to die. Great post! ~Sophia Scherzer
Hi Sydney!
ReplyDeleteI like your idea a lot because I too think we need more booths at Library West.
As far as your elevator pitch, you spoke very clearly and your message was very clear. You dressed professionally and really fit the business model you were presenting.
I also had a few suggestions on something you can do in your next elevator pitch:
1) I recommend using better phone positioning to avoid bright lights shining into the camera.
2) Try to use you hands effectively but not too much when you speak. This will allow the audience to focus more on what you are saying vs. what you are doing.
3) Finally, think of an interesting hook to use at the beginning.
These will bring your elevator pitch presentation to the next level!
Hi Sydney, it was encouraging to hear you connect the tips that Pryor included in his lecture to make the pitch more engaging. Using testimonials from people you interviewed makes the idea sound more credible and worthwhile, since more people have backed it. I agree with Cason, an engaging hook that relates to the need of the audience and their struggle in finding somewhere to sit will increase the attention of listeners. Then head into the solution component you are proposing. I think it was also important and effective that you included the positive results that will come from this change. This is always helpful for investors to see what can actually come about if they support you and the opportunity. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteHey Sydney,
ReplyDeleteI love the issue you are targeting as I struggle with finding a booth almost everyday. It is very important that you added how you are going to implement this plan and take it into action. I think another aspect of your problem could target finding booths by outlets as most students use tablets/computers to help them study/ see their notes and often their devices begin to die. Great post!
~Sophia Scherzer