Elevator Pitch No.2
Assignment 17A: Elevator Pitch No.2
Feedback:
I think the people who took the time to comment on my last post gave me great tips that I was able to implement into this elevator pitch. I found insightful how a couple students expressed to me how they enjoyed my takings from interviews and using it to make myself credible in the pitch, so I mace sure I did that again as well as add more references to give myself more credibility.
Changes:
I fixed my background lighting since that seemed to be a bit of a distraction in the last pitch and I also stopped moving my hands so much. I somewhat kept the same speech format, but just made sure to fix those minor background and motion details.
I think the people who took the time to comment on my last post gave me great tips that I was able to implement into this elevator pitch. I found insightful how a couple students expressed to me how they enjoyed my takings from interviews and using it to make myself credible in the pitch, so I mace sure I did that again as well as add more references to give myself more credibility.
Changes:
I fixed my background lighting since that seemed to be a bit of a distraction in the last pitch and I also stopped moving my hands so much. I somewhat kept the same speech format, but just made sure to fix those minor background and motion details.
Hi Sydney, it looks like the video you posted is made private in the settings. If you change it to unlisted then people are able to see if when they click on the link. Regardless, it sounds like you were very mindful of the pieces of feedback you previously received and implemented the changes smoothly. I agree, always try to reference surveys, statistics, or other interviews in the elevator pitch as this is what builds credibility for the service among other people. Reducing the amount of hand movements allows the audience to focus on your words more as well. Thanks.
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